lol. wow. that was fun...

Ah, this takes me back to the good old days, when i did the naughty with a possible German heritage (thinks the nazis are cool) white supremacist, I'm African American and not in the mlk way so much as the malcolm x way. Such passion though. And he knew what he was doing. It helped that he was a masochist too. :)

It's sad, because any guy who doesn't put as much effort into just a taste of my supple flesh, and he put in so much, i assume is on some level more racist than him, but possible in denial. Like in the "if you really loved me you'd put more into it" type of way. fyi, love the story. more.

I really like your writing very witty and entertaining.

"'Hi, there! This is my friend Rocco, your biceps make his bollocks tight and he wants to ** you hard.'" Oh my god! That is hillariously, painfully embarrassing. Love it! In fact, I love this whole first chapter and can't wait for more.

"his eyeballs like saucepans as he threw me a petrified expression" I love that the big, bad Nazi is afraid of a small, effeminate, gay Jew. :)

I love the characters in this (and the plot)! XD It's fun that it's set in Scotland, cuz I get to practise reading in a Scottish accent! (Well...in my head...) Ah, now there's a romance seemingly doomed from the start...wonder if it'll actually work out? Maybe Rocco can get Alfred to stop listening to his parents' ideals...? So far I think my favourite character is Milo. He's so quirky. Oh, personal ad...wonder how that's gonna turn out? Looking forward to more!

Hullo. Everything i will say is a personal opinion, so i hope you won't take anything too serious; because, you see, it's my point of view. not yours. not anyone else's.

At first, I didn't really get the title. What the Hell does bratwurst have to do with anything?(On a side-note: I'm sure it's written with a 't' because 'braten' is a verb that means sth along grilling, and a bratwurst is grilled, so yeah - maybe even with 2 't', but I'm not german so i dunno.)
And, then, when i read the last line it kinda dawned on me. Those puns totally creep me out, but at least it now makes sense.

So... even though the character descriptions are ~very~ detailed, and i was about to skip them, i didn't. If they were longer, though, i would have. But it might be just me that likes simple and plain characters (appearence wise). Otherwise, it's a nice and flowing read. The only thing that bothered me were the lip colors and noses, and i understand that it might be aestethically important... but i consider them irrelevant. Just my opinion.

Okay, now that i cleared these 2 aspects, i can finally say that I'm so awfully curious about where you're going with this story. Serious. I think it was around last year that i searched for a story exactly like this one. I didn't find any, though. I had just gotten an interest in religions and beliefs and such, and actually wondered how a situation like this one could be 'overcome'. If I had any knowledge about judeism (sp?) i would write my own just so i could read one. Like LaVey did with his bible. Anyway, this means that now i'm depositing high expectations on your story (this sounded slightly funny,) and am going to giddily await the next chapter.

Love it- it's so rare to find slash fics set in Scotland, and this one is brilliant. Love Milo.