 Caisele 2009-10-20 . chapter 1awesome stuff |
 The Falconer 2008-11-17 . chapter 1I enjoyed reading this very much!! It was actually kinda hot, and funny too! And even though it could go much further, it is thoroughly satisfying in its own way. A little glimpse into the characters' lives. I love it!
Thanks for sharing this lovely piece with us!
Cheers! |
 Alan Ball 2008-06-27 . chapter 1Do you intend to add to this? I would love to see how such a relationship - very much frowned upon in victorian london - would survive (or not). You really captured my attention and i hope any more would be as believable. |
 Miss-Marley 2008-06-27 . chapter 1X3 This was a very lovely piece. I really like the your style and how nicely your words flow together. People who can write so beautifully in first person always astound me. You have quite the way with words and in providing a lovely description of a scene without going over the top!
Very very wonderful! |
 ffxpassion 2008-06-27 . chapter 1You're an amazing writer! Everything you wrote about was very descriptive and became very visual! I wish I had the same effect in my writing! :] I really enjoyed reading it! |