Very nice!
Insecure guy with a loving stepbrother! Aw, so cute!

Have you written Always before this? It looks like it. This is way better, more character development and the feeling reach more.

Thanks for sharing!

btw I love your oneshots! Please do more of them *puppy eyes* ;)

aww... i loved it (:

Oh, me likee. So sweet.

:D

Aw. Cute read

Hmm... Sweet. Some people would argue about the whole incest thing, but I knida agree. It really isn't incest if they're stepbrothers.

Lee

awesome story!

This is incredibly sweet and such.. Altough I have a slight issue with brothers doing that. Even though they aren't blood related.

Great work though. It's very well written and all.

I love it, my freind. MAN! That was hot. Really, it was.
Zack is awesome, I think I fell in love with him too. =P
Great job, person^.^


~Lovely Monster

this was such a sweet story. I know, I know, sweet, ich! Who wants to hear that, but still all the same, it was very nice. of course I have to say from his first kiss to who knows what happened after the zipper went down, i don't know, but it was an awfully quick bit of pleasure. too bad that it was only a one shot, the story would have been really nice if continued, you know, drama abounds as Andy hesitantly walked back into Best Buy, just to see Kerr and Kerr catches his eye and one thing leads to another and Kerr apologizes for what he said because he was scared and not out and was taken by surprise and that he might, just might be attracted to Andy too but really didn't know what to do about it and being confronted so suddenly just out of the blue, despite the fact that Andy was blatantly spending a fortune on things he really didn't need...
Anyway, yeah, it would have been nice to have another chapter or so. Because of course Andy wil lfall for Zach and Zach already loves Andy and what if Zach knew how Kerr was going to react...oh the possibilities. Anyway, I really liked it

I LOVED IT!
It was so adorable.

xoxoxoxoxoxoxo,
Ty

Oh gods, this is just so cute...Wow, you really made me melt with this fic ^^
...And damn yeah, Daniel Jackson's cute too

Pretty I like it. :]

Fluffy.

Very sweet, and nice to see Andy got a happy ending! :]