I wonder what you're parodying... are you mocking whoever the poem is addressing, I wonder? I really like this. The last line paired with the author's note gave me chills, maybe because it feels like an echo of what I've felt so strongly before about someone else. Anyway, I adore your imagery; it's all so vivid, the portraits you paint. Beautiful and haunting, almost creepy, which seems to be your intention.

Wow, I got an almost creepy feeling towards the end, very strong emotions come from this and the images that stuck in my mind were just so strong.

Keep it up.