kigono,
you're a really good writer. I like this poem.

Hm... why did you underline the last words of each line? To emphasize the rhyme? I think it should be I havent't bled and not I haven't bleed. But then I guess you can claim poetic license? :D I think in this piece, a certain pain and anger is transported to the reader and that makes it good. :D

Keep writing. :D