I like it; you've got me hooked! Great opener :) I like how she picked him apart so...descriptively? I guess that's the right word...

I do hope you know where you're going with this, because I'd like to continue reading it ;)

Looking forward to reading more!

This is such a cute story! I hope you're not going to just leave it hanging there! Okay, I know reviews are supposed to be for constructive criticism and whatnot but seriously, I cannot be bothered to point out mistakes to you since the story is the only thing I'm interested in. But here's a long review for your hard work... :D Please update soon!

Interesting. I'm looking forward to see where this story will go. I know that I'll be reading this to see what happens next! Keep up the great work and write you later! ;)

great story, keep writing more!