I like the idea of new characters in each story!
And these are quite funny and cute! :)

These are pretty funny!
Part Three please ;)

I think it's Really, really good!^.^
And that friend of yours must be a meanie:b
Put the next idea in... Plz!

Yous should totally write a 3rd! these are soo sweet!

haha. these stories are so funny

I adored your writing... as always! We should definitely write a story together sometime, eh Ettie?!

haha. adorable couple :)
PLEASE UPDATE~

great stories! don't stop writing! write a third chapter!

Loved it, the way they talk is really my kind of humor,i could really see myself in the same situation. Wish you would have put what happens afterwards and give details..

omg, i love how this story is going! please, please, please write more!

lol...a bear..wow..that is very good..can't wait for the next part then..i like it..bye..bye..

This will be me on my wedding night as well. It's not that I think sex is gross, but I'm scared. Mostly about all the emotional attachments that come with sex, and a little bit about what actually happens...

Hahha, I think it's super cute, and I like the idea of each chapter being about a different couple. You really could keep this going, different scenarios of newlyweds! I loved it and I can't wait to read more :D

so funny...plz do another chappy?
look at my story?

Ha, very funny. I think these were both good. Couple of things, you don't capitalize some things. Like, "you know you love me." You have to capitalize that because it's the first sentence in the diologue. So remember that. Otherwise, it looked alright. Keep it up! And if you're going to add more, it may help to take the complete sign off. Just my opinion :)
Faith