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| simpleplan13 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abuseIn the first stanza, the word pure seemed like an odd choice, basically just there for the rhyme. Other than that the rhyme scheme worked well and I liked the piece. It's very relateable and it was sad, but kinda funny at the same time with the lawn line. |
| xxInsanityxx 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseaww how sweet well he is annoying and in love with her |