This is very sweet and very short. Normally I don't like super short oneshots, but I think you did a wonderful job with this one. I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

Very beautiful story.

aw, that. is. so. cute! :D
i loved it, and i especially loved that it's a true story.

Oh, that's LOVELY! I adored it. So much emotion put into such a short piece, but it was so well-done. Great job!

aw this was so cute!! =)

soo cute!!

Very cute and sweet :)

This is the sweetest one-shot I've read :)

oh god! I cried! lol!
it wasn't even long enough so that my eyes would fill up with tears! but I CRIEED!!

so so sweet!
I loved it!

That was gorgeous...it was a beautifully captured moment. Great job!

Wow! It's short and sweet and heartwarming. It's real-life at its best. :) You're incredible.

Short and sweet. I loved it. =)

Keep writing!

that was stunning. I mean, I don't know if that's the word, but seriously, gorgeous writing. you captured the moment skillfully... and I loved it.

nyaw
so sweet, i love it

Oh, wow. Wowowowow. That was gorgeous. So poignant. Thanks for painting such a heart-warming picture for us. To be honest, I thought at first that this proposal was a little, I don't know, pretentious? Like those people you see proposing when the ball drops in Time Square? Yeah, but my view changed so much as I read on. Because this proposal was so PERSONAL, and I know he was not doing it for show. It just seemed so much more sincere than people fighting to get the most intimate moment of their lives on camera. But I digress.

[How can she say no when the crowd is hooting and hollering and his voice is so earnest and she loves him more than anything else?] That was so genuine and beautiful and I like how you included the audience's impact here. One of my favorite sentences in this whole piece.

[“Here’s the right answer to the big question,” he toasts. . .] I'm not sure if you wanted a "to" after the "Here's" since that was the pattern you were following, and the general toast pattern.

[Because he knows: years from now when her children ask her what it means to earn wings liker their father. . .] I think you meant "like," and not "liker." But that ending sentence was absolutely lovely, so wonderful I can't even begin to describe how much it moved me.

[When he steps back into the line his eyes never leave her. Never once.] I just LOVED that you included this detail in there. There is something so stirring about that. It just made me smile and put a hand to my mouth.

And this was so beautiful I had to close my eyes and relish in the moment you captured for us. Thank you so much for sharing. Amazing work.

;)becky