 Tragedy of Light and Dark 2009-03-02 . chapter 4Wow, I feel all deprived. I came back and read the last chapter only to find that it's on hiatus. I was wondering why you didn't update for a while. Apparently, I'm not smart enough to read hiatus. Just when things were getting good too. I'm really liking Hiromi and Kurosagari's relationship too. I'm glad that he gave in to temptation. Please bring this one out soon! I want to see it completed. |
 Black Bride Anna 2008-12-22 . chapter 4Just as they were about to really get to it, you go and hiatus it. How cruel...The pain is just too much >< T_T (sob) Hurry up and finish something! (a couple of somethings, you still have a lot on your plate!) then come back and start writing on this again! |
 Inu-Inu's Midget Friend 2008-12-17 . chapter 4This was pretty good. I like the build up as well as the kissing scene between Haruaki and Hiromi. It was just so dramatic. Lol, it kind of made you feel like you're watching a really good soap opera or something.
Too bad this work is going on HIATUS. I enjoyed it and I'll definitely wait for more updates on it. |
 Dark Kurogane 2008-12-17 . chapter 4 Ah, there's a lot to cover here.
Hiromi is shy but he's definitely brave now. I like the love-hate relationship of these two guys. Half of the time you can't tell if they are together or if they just hate each other and they argue like a married couple.
Hiromi likes to tease him, doesn't he? Lol, very interesting.
You're also doing a good job of conveying Kuro's sexual frustration. It's only natural for someone abused to just want someone to love and I think you justify it very well here.
Let's just hope he actually doesn't regret it. |
 Utena Himemiya 2008-12-17 . chapter 4 Azumi must have really screwed up Kuro's mind. I think he's starting to feel something for Hiromi especially the way he acted when he was all kissing Haruaki and such.
Kuro's very conflicted and you portrayed that beautifully. |
 SilverIsamu 2008-12-17 . chapter 4 Yay! I hope Hiromi and Kuro-sama actually get together! |
 Yaoi Love-Love Girl 2008-12-17 . chapter 4 Does this mena that we'll see some hot man-on-man action? I sure do hope so! This is great! I'll definitely wait for you to update! You're a great authoress and this story rocks! |
 Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-12-17 . chapter 4Very nice moment between Hiromi and Kurosagari. It's a shame that this work is being put on Hiatus but I can understand, you're a busy authoress and you have so many good stories.
This was a good read and I'll definitely wait until your next installment. For now, I'll be reading your other works! |
 Dark Angel Hiroshima 2008-12-17 . chapter 4Very cute! I like how touching this chapter was, especially for Kurosagari's first time and everything. I really like Natsuko so far out of all of the girls, even if she has pink hair, lol. |
 Black Bride Anna 2008-12-10 . chapter 3Beautiful and tragic, can't ask for more. Poor Kurosagari realy has it tough and it seems like Azumi and Haruaki are out there to make things complicated.
Even though this chapter was short, it was incredibly good. I've become quite the fan of your works and I hope to see you continue! |
 Black Bride Anna 2008-12-10 . chapter 2I like the interaction between Kurosagari and Hiromi. I hope they can get to be a couple and that other girl Azumi is bad for him in so many ways.
I also like the bar-scene between the two, very cute remarks were made by Hiromi and they hit Kuro in a hard place (and I don't mean the pants, lol) I'll go and read the next chapter and see what happens!
An instant favorite! |
 Black Bride Anna 2008-12-10 . chapter 1This is the first story that I've read from you that doesn't have a prolouge. I can tell that you wrote this a while ago because it doesn't seem in your genre now but it's interesting nonetheless.
I'll look forward to reading this original idea of combineing bishounens and swords. Nothing like a classic ninja tale turned shounen-ai! |
 Inu-Inu's Midget Friend 2008-12-01 . chapter 3Damn Hiatus? That sucks! I wanted to keep reading this but I can see why with all of the stories that you have posted. I hope that you get to this one soon! I'll look forward to reading your next chapter though.
KuroXHiromi forever! |
 Inu-Inu's Midget Friend 2008-12-01 . chapter 2Kurosagari and Hiromi are really cute! I love the way that Hiromi tends to piss Kuro off every chance he gets in a teasing way. They kind of sound like a married couple like that.
I hope Azumi or whatever her name is dies or is randomly killed by ninja or something. I hate that bitch. Please kill her for me?
*goes to read the next chapter* |
 Inu-Inu's Midget Friend 2008-12-01 . chapter 1This was great! It was definitely an action-packed first chapter and I think I'll definitely be getting into this story! |