nice story name i love tht song! xD i played it on ym ipod like 100 times

I really like your main characters and how they are slaves of their body's desires. Your descriptions are great too, the only thing that bothered me a little was Dawn’s usage of a big words, it made me ask, would a rocker like that use words like that and if the answer is yes, for example because he’s well educated person, it a good thing to explain things like that; but that’s just my opinion.

And I’m looking forward to new chapters.

Yay! Another update, this was an awesome chapter!

HOT. I will learn how to write lyrics, if only because I love this story so damn much

I was wondering when Saja would show up. LOL! Very cool update!

good work here! sorry, i can't write lyrics to save my life, all i can suggest is finding a already written song and use that.

Nice! I like the story so far, it well done. Update soon!

Great that him and Phil aren't fighting any more but I think Dawn's a little irritated at the timing lol. Well, hopefully the two lovebirds will figure something out. Great chappie, keep writing!

So ... will Phil find out the hard way that Dawn is fooling around with a vampire?

I see some awesome grinding sexiness between Dawn and Saja at the club!

Such a good story! Can't wait for the next part!

I'm sensing it won't be that easy to get rid of him.

Aw! But then he has been a bit on the brutal side. Violent and completely disregarding Dawn's wishes. Though I do hope he comes around. I think they could work... sorta... when Saja doesn't try to tear his throat out on a daily basis that is. Keep writing- Can't wait for the next chappie!!

wow...talk about intervention! gr8 job!

O... More please!

OH NO! Dawn's not dead, right?