Yello. Uhm...few things. First, this is a very good story. It has a good pace, it's not too choppy, you don't use any repetitive words (ha ha xD) and I'm getting a sense of some of the characters. It pulled me in. Umm...only problem I had was the actual setting. Not that exactly, but the world. I didn't understand why demons were there, why school mandatory...some background. Not that much, mind--but why Uar had to leave, or if you don't do that, some explanation onto demons. For example, maybe explaining to us that there are different kinds. You could put it in when you see them, like saying, 'each had different skin colors, such as/because' etc.

Other than that, looked good.^^ Just the right length, too. Keep it up!

That was cute =) Kaea and Sela sort of remind me of you and I-but only a little, and it's nothing to do with their personalities. Not really, anyway. You and your interspecies relationships! Vampires, demons...what's next?

But yeah, anyway, it was good. JULY IS COMING. I'm not ready. Are you?