Reviews for Never: The Birth - FictionPress.com

MamiPapi 2008-07-14 ch 5,	Wonder what is gonna happen from hence forth. art of me kinda wishes that she begins to love him. Was she feeling his emotions when she felt sad and worn out?
lacy-9 2008-07-13 ch 5,	:]
lacy-9 2008-07-04 ch 4,	yay!! really good chapter!! but are they really going to kill her??
MamiPapi 2008-07-04 ch 4,	Why is Cole treating her that way? Aren't mates supposed to love and care for each other? I finally get why Yolanda wants Riley away from the pack. This is quite sad...
lacy-9 2008-07-02 ch 3,	freaking awsome! i want to know how he reacts to her disappearing, in a way i feel kinda bad for him..almost.
MamiPapi 2008-07-02 ch 3,	Oh dear, I wonder what is going to happen now? Riley seems to totally hate him, and with good reason too. But is Cole really all that bad? He'll be really ** off that's for sure.. And I wonder what Yolanda is up to. She doesn't sound right somehow... and why does Riley smell like wolf? Too many questions... too short chapters..hint! update soon!
lacy-9 2008-06-29 ch 2,	i like it so far :] keep up the good work.
MamiPapi 2008-06-29 ch 1,	Hi there, this story is going well and it's rather interesting. Only thing is that it probably needs editing for the typos that are around. Maybe you should get it Beta-ed? R/R mine as well pls?