oh wow!! I am impressed, please continue. I am also happy that you're trying your hand at romance, and from the first chapter I think it may come naturally to you. Your writing here seems better than ever, and I love where you're taking it. I hope you update soon.

Jen

All I can say is that you definitely have me hooked. I'm already in love with your characters and found the ["...or is this the chilling conclusion of the Skinny Asian Girl’s Quest for the Vanilla Coke? You know how I love that little drama."] bit especially amusing.

Nicely done. Can't wait for more!

- Koki