|Reviews for unwrapped|
| reeka7 5/9/09 . chapter 1
This is good.
Definitely worth going back and editing- for the spelling mistakes.
Other than that, this is really good. You can imagine this girl writing furiously on a note pad. I think many people can relate to this kind of confusion. It has a lot of truth to it. Sure it's not a regular story, more like a monologue- but shmeh. Regular gets old fast.
| koerle 2/19/09 . chapter 2
This was so pure and raw. I kind of felt like an intruder. Like I was reading a diary, doing something I shouldn't do.
It's always easy commenting from the sidelines, so I won't give my 2 cents. Besides, who really wants "advice" from a total stranger.
I hope writing your frustration off was theraputical. :)
| someonenotreal 1/1/09 . chapter 2
that was really hard to read, but thank you.
| Da Vinci at Work 8/4/08 . chapter 1
Wow, this just speaks for itself. Wow. Damn, this is powerful, makes me want to cry.
| Hannah 7/20/08 . chapter 1
It's very emotional, very raw, and I think it works very well. I bet their are many out there who could relate very well to this piece.
| ess3sandra 7/1/08 . chapter 1
girl, either you move on or you tell him. end of story. but just reliving the tmes you guys had and wallow will just make yu depresses. its what i think, you do what you choos, but the same thing hppened to me and movin on is ok.