"as if that alone will summon the God answer" - brilliant

~mezzie

sometimes poem like this irk me, but I really enjoyed reading this. it was a beautiful piece. especially this line, which I think, made the poem: "but I would want nothing more than to be there, in that room holding your head in my lap and stroking your hair as if that act alone would send these demons away." what a lovely thought. nice work, and an interesting put-together.