Heh heh, I can't really log in 'cause I'm at my school's library (and I shouldn't even be useing the computer for this) but I really liked this poem. Goddammit, now I have to go find something to eat (stomach growls)

That was pretty entertaining. I think you misspelled Irresistable.

lol Sounds yummy. Awesome write.

despite my initial "WHAT?" reaction, this is very good... the sandwich and style. I was a little concerned for your mental stability, but it works. I like the interjections.

It actually sounds pretty good right about now, too bad I already had lunch. Nice job on describing your favorite food though. Keep it Up!