This is really well written. Creepy, too.

My first thought when I started reading this story was "Hey, I have one of those, too!" A serial killer boyfriend story, not a serial killer boyfriend of my own, of course. ;)

I think we all knew Russell was going to bite it. And I don't think any of us are sorry. Maybe Hannah's not so warped after all? Not saying I'd condone it IRL, but some people we just don't cry over. Some people's passing makes us sigh with relief.

Your Chase is still so very... normal. I'm actually sort of glad I arrived before the really weird/dark/gory stuff starts. Means I have to wait, but anticipation is sometimes a good thing. ^_^

PS: I hang in graveyards, too. It's the only place in town that everyone leaves me in peace.

another great chapter. I'm really interested in Scotts character, and i want to know more about him. i guess i'll find out when i read on. Still really good, i can't wait to read more.

-M.

This first chapter was great. Serial killer boyfriend eh? Now I HAVE to read the rest! Thats a good thing lol.

Wow, that was interesting first chapter. the last line really packed a punch.
Great work, its really good.

-M.

I honestly had no idea what they were going on about. I thought that maybe he was cheating on her or something, and she knew about it.

I really wasn't expecting him to be a murderer, nor a serial killer at that.

It's a very original idea, and I absolutely love it, so I am most definitely going to continue reading.

You should allow anonymous reviews are Ars Moriendi! Pretty please?

YES! Thank you, thank you, thank you! You were wrong about no one waiting for you to update this. I was! And I'm sure many others were as well! I was resigned to the fact that you weren't going to continue it, and was ready to get hooked on your latest story. I had read the first chapter in it a couple days ago and was checking tonight to see if you had another up yet, and I saw you had updated this instead, and I was so happy! =D Thank you! And great chapter, by the way! ;-)

Wow this is a really awesome story! you have talent! the characters are realistic and the story line is easy to follow and understand and on a scale of 1-10 i'd giv it like a 12 lol

This story is amazing! I'm so happy I clicked it!

I love it! I have never read something like this before!

This is extremely awesome. I really enjoyed the conversations between the two - its very believable and not funny but (can't find the word I'm looking for) I'll just say appropriate? No thats not the right word to even consider putting there. :/ Anyways I am going to read the next couple of chapters :]

Hm. I have no idea why that name sounded so familiar, but dammit I sure do wanna find out. Haha.

I have a hunch as to why the chapter was named what it is. And I think it has something to do with what her dad said about parting everything out...but maybe I'm just over-analyzing things.

Haha. For some reason I love Pooks. Fun. And I'm very eager to get to the horror. Love it.

Good chapter :)

~8days

o wow! This was a great chapter! It leaves a lot to think about now, especially for the character of hannah. Like does she sort of 'approve' of what Chase does now? And is it bad that I like Chase and find him very attractive- a supposed serial killer? (hehe) Your story leaves a lot to think about. Like the theme of whats right or whats wrong... I would love to see more of Chase. Can't wait for another update! :)

I did a happy dance when I saw you updated! The story's progressing along, and ooh I can sense something big about to happen, at least with Hannah/Chase relationship.

I'm quite glad for the new chapter though! I'm having trouble with updating on my end as well haha

best of luck!

-Rizzy