Moah, you know, I loved how you ended this story. ^^
And, I must admit, I love Jake! *dont wanna use Death as name*
hihi, well, cant wait to read more stories from ya ;)

Why the hell do you have to be so damn good? :P Anyways this story was a really good one, I could feel the angst and damnyou are good!:) See ya until next time!

The ending pissed me off so bad!! That could only mean one thing...
YOU'RE AMAZING!! The twist, the style, the snapping, the craziness, the truth of everything. PERFECT!!
The changes in Faith were slow and it was to a time where one wouldn't realize she's changed.
I loved how there were so many tears; this was really such an amazing story.
IRONY is definitely your category.
(geez, Death is such a JERK! lol)

ur story had magic in it, and dats y i chiose to read it all the way, otherwise i don't do dat normally, the ending hurts, i like how u leave it all to writers mind to interpret and i also hate this quality. u r realy good! m ur biggest fan from now on!!

In a weird way...I loved and hated it.

One word...shocking...

The most common question: WTF?! WHAT'S HIS NAME?! Will be answered a bit later.
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA. =D
yea...what IS his name? if it's like...Roger or Bob or something i'm going to die. =))

Does he want me to clean his room or something?
AHAHAHAHAHAHA!
OH MY GOD. she's hilarious! :D

What the hell? This ended so... so... ugh.

Hm... personally, I'm rather glad that you ended it this way. Death is not a creature of emotions and it would have seemed... I don't know... wrong, somehow if you had suddenly made him this lovesick fool.

I found this really refreshing, honestly. Sometimes, I love the bittersweet endings too because real life is not all happy endings and "I love you too's."

I thought you did the story justice. I don't know if you've ever read the Vampire Academy series, but in the recent one the main character kind of gets into a situation like Faith has. I saw some parallels there and found it interesting.

Good job on the story! I'm glad you changed it to what it was. I think anything else would have been too weird. Kudos!

Oh dear oh dear.

God he's a dick. I wish I could say I'm pissed with the ending, but it just fit so well (plus I could never say that). I'm so sick of stories like these that come out with an impossible ending.

What I really loved about the ending, was that even though he had no feelings (which does make sense) there was a slight (very slight) indication that said otherwise.

I also enjoyed Faith's courage, like OMG what a strong girl. Yet she was flawed, and her strength shown in a different slant a light.

good job sweets!

Ohmygod. Death was such a bitch lol. but faith was whiney. I dont know if i like this. i do. yet im like...NO...nut i do like it. to an extent. enough for me to favorite it and possibly read your other stories. :3

Oh my godess! Im breathtaken! Im so glad that things are slow and that Im alone at work today so I could finally finish reading this!!

IT WAS SO AMAZING! I loved all the twists and the sorrow! It was incredably well written and enthralling! I couldn't stop reading, it was like a drug.

I liked the ending, it was so unexpected and beautiful in a way, the family was finally reunited. Lovely. But a part of me still hoped that death would fall inlove with faith aswell and well...make her a god or something (I know I'm a hopeless romantic :)).

You portrayed Faiths feelings so well, I felt like I was her. I felt her need, her pain and her paranoia over her mother. It was amazing, breathtaking and perfect!

I feel like I could rant on and on all day about how much I loved everything but maybe I shouldn't. And I really don't know what to say, there's to many thoughts and feelings, I don't know how to channel them into words! Gah I just loved every part of it!

Okey, this was a seriously crappy comment, I think my commenting skills are a bit untrained, they grown fat from the lack of use :)
Well it's a comment atleast ^^

LOVE THIS STORY!

Slightly embarrassed that I cried the whole way through the last two and a bit chapters, got to admit. But that was pure genious. I am glad it was a happy ending but not in a way that is completely undeserving. I was thinking it would turn into some weird love story between her and death and knew that would be far too corny and sick.
Beautifully written. You have sadism down to a tea, which is a compliment in case you take that the wrong way. And never once did Death faulter in his character, show too much emotion or what ever.

~H-H

i dont know whether im completely in love with this or i completely hate it.