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| neonchickennugget 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is very well written. I could picture the whole scene in my head. But, to answer your question, "Would anyone care if one more girl took her life because she can’t stand it anymore?" YES people would care(no matter how much you think they wouldn't) Anyway, if you keep writing, I'll keep reading :) neonchickennugget |
| Tiernan Hunter 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is really well written. A bit on the short side, but still good. And by the way, if you EVER did this, especially since I suggested it to you...I'd drag your sorry little butt back from the dead and kill you again. |
| Messiah Syndrome 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseI just finished reading, and it's as deep as it is concerning. I want to tell you to keep writing, that your stuff is good and will effect people-I also want to tell you to keep your head up. If you're feeling that way (people don't write like that for no reason), get it out somehow. Talk to someone, or just keep on writing. I'll keep on reading. ~Messiah Syndrome |