Guess most of the A's left a review so it's time for a B man to take his turn lol.

It's interesting o.O dunno where you're going with this or if you're trying to connect it with the dreams you've been having, but keep it up.

I think your story is interesting. It makes me really want to know who this man in her dream is. All I have to say, really, is that you went from past tense to present tense when he brought out the mirror to have her see her own reflection. And then you returned to past tense.

I don't know if you made that intentional, but I thought it strange. Anyway, your story leaves me wondering. Keep writing.

Wow! Great description especially in the first few paragraphs! I very much enjoyed reading your story! Keep writing. It’s interesting