ahh another view of Oz

"No matter how many times
I click my heels
Home is lost"

and i have to say these lines are my favourite

.. just curious . have you read Wicked?

i never actually seen the wizard of oz before
but this was nice, i liked the rhyming & now the lines
are kind of short and choppy.

Nice poem.

I liked the premise. Her broken fairytale ending.

That was funny; an amusing look on the Wizard of Oz. Being somewhere else isn't always better or even interesting, then. Oh, I don't think "fakes" needs an apostrophe though. Good job!

That was really good. I usually don't read poems, but I'm glad I looked at this one.