Oh, I really liked this piece. It has such an eerie feel to it. I especially loved how you took suicide itself and personified it, gave it a mouth to speak. My favorite part is the ending. Great job.

Oh… ‘Tis heart rendering! But well written. Yes, it is sad that there are many young people who feel that the only thing they can do is take their life but they don’t know how much their friends and family love them… Well written I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing