by far my new favorite of your poems. it's decisive, but leaves the readers wanting more. "The world will turn, just sing" is so easily beautiful; I want to make that line tangible somehow. beautiful imagery involving skin and a map. simply lovely.

Not your best, but you have some good bits. The weaker parts for me are where it seems you've found a word that you just REALLY REALLY want to use :p

SoL

this is very very wonderful and fantastical

i am a fan

-lady fingers

we are fiction press sisters then?

wow, the imagery is full of passion.