|Reviews for Elysium|
| Singing After Dark 7/18/08 . chapter 1
by far my new favorite of your poems. it's decisive, but leaves the readers wanting more. "The world will turn, just sing" is so easily beautiful; I want to make that line tangible somehow. beautiful imagery involving skin and a map. simply lovely.
| Solstice Of Light 7/1/08 . chapter 1
Not your best, but you have some good bits. The weaker parts for me are where it seems you've found a word that you just REALLY REALLY want to use :p
| Lady Fingers 6/30/08 . chapter 1
this is very very wonderful and fantastical
i am a fan
we are fiction press sisters then?
| kloun mannequin 6/30/08 . chapter 1
wow, the imagery is full of passion.