Liking it so far. More romance between Adam and Mel please! :D

Aww what a cute couple- Adam is so kind. I can't wait to read the future chapters of this!
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This was really good- Sorry I haven't reviewed in ages... there has been so much on, I even tore the ligaments in my knee when it popped out of the socket and the whole baby thing... still it was lovely reading your work again.
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Came back to learn what happened. No grammatical or spelling errors I can see. Nice flow of events, the relationship between she and Adam maturing, tension in the form of the baby's impending arrival...and the emphasis of how important it is for a father to be part of a child's life. Very nice. Consummate storytelling skill.

Aww, adam is the cutest damn thing ever. The storys looking great so far, i hope to read more soon!

AW! Yay the first kiss. How cute. And she gets to move out of the house! I'm very excited for that. She needs to get out of the environment and start over. Where is she going to work to get the money? Is Mahogany going to move with her?

Wow i really love this story! I have a bad feeling that this is a little to good to be true at the moment and something bad is going to happen...again...I am also curious to how her and adams relationship is going and if its going to develop further. I hope you update again soon and i cant wait to read the next chapter.
Belle Morte858

Aww bless I hope her baby is cute! She will be a great mom!
Keep writing
Xx Your number one fan

Oh my god he is such a sweetheart! Can't wait for their 'emotional talk', please update again soon! Nannon xx

Yh thats what everyone wants really someone to love them and I can totally relate to that. I like the fact that you address these issues rather than avoiding them like most. You are one of the few people that do not stereotype if they see a pregnant teenager etc. (I can always talk to you) Your stories are gr8 bdw
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Carl is such an arsehole he really is. But at least she wasnt raped!
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Aww babies are really cute and I ... I dunno

Aww the baby likes her! Aww this is making me think... about my situation
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Wow that was really good! I love it!
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WOW! I really really really love this story! I think you've captured the situation really well and the characters are amazing. Its a sad story at times and it reminds people of how shitty the world really is...sometimes or most of the times...but thats what makes it good, how real it is. It made me angry and sad and happy at the right times and i really am enjoying it. Hope you update again really soon!

Belle Morte858