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ComatoseCatastrophe 2008-07-22 ch 1,	abuseamazing and so good! My fave lines were "See the thing is I was trying to fix my heart and I thought it just might help if I used yours for spare parts." I'm in this situation now and I just don't know how to let the guy down without hurting him and not being friends. We're not even going out but I feel like we are =[[ oiy Awesome job again !! =-)
Irina Samuels 2008-07-02 ch 1,	abuseI think that its pretty good, but a little...almost like involved. songs, in my opinion, should tell a good story, but be sort of a like short, sweet, to-the-point sort of thing. I also think its interesting how you used sports metaphorically. keep going! Best, Irina