Wow. You say this is just a simple song, but there is quite alot of depth to it. Even although its a bit of an over done subject, you've done a really masterful job at it. Well done. The rhyming flows so well without feeling forced at all. Keep it up!

Yours sincerly
Crazy-O

"Without you even noticing".. I don't think you need the word you there
"And I know You have become my saving grace"... why did you capitalize this you?

I liked it. The rhyming flowed well and the piece was very bittersweet & releteable. Nicely done.

aw! ;) I love the beautiful portrayal of emotions in this song, and the obvious sense of being saved and loved. I especially love the lines, "For so long I barely knew that you were here, But now I couldn't imagine the feeling being less clear, Somehow it's only with you that I can be complete, But giving in is beautiful, no sense of defeat".

However, I think you should work a little on making it flow better. Who knows? Maybe if I heard it being sung, I wouldn't feel like the rhythm isn't right.

Apart from that, it's lovely.

~mez~ :]

Aw, this song is so sweet. You have a nice title and some well written lyrics. I think people can relate to your song. Very well done, I enjoyed it a lot.

Nice. It reminds me of a book i read called New Moon by Stephenie Meyer. youve probably heard of it. anyway, it reminds me of how bella was always calling jake her 'safe harbor.' anyway, good song!
Irina

Awwh that's cute. I love the chorus part.