That's OK!! This was still the most wonderful cute story EVER!
I can't believe how adorable it was! If you ever do get past those first few chapter's you might wanna contact me! I'd definetely read it! Thanks for a great story!
Queen Ehlana

NONONONONONONONONONO! LAYNE'S NOT DEAD! LAYNESNOTDEADLAYNESNOTDEADLAYNESNOTDEAD! OMYGOSH YOU"VE GOT TO UPDATE THIS RIGHT FREAKEN NOW! I NEED MY LAST 2 CHAPTERS! OMYGOSH HURRY!
Queen Ehlana

ughh , that ** !
he burned the damn page .
he didnt even bother WHY were they talking !
gahh , stuoid scott .

Whew!! It was just Layne!! I was worried!! But I feel kinda wierd now since I was rambling about Lord V. last chap...hehe I guess I was wrong... Anyways great chapter!! Please continue!! Thankies!
Queen Ehlana

AH! LORD V.! *screams* Anyways that was quick. Now all I can ask of you is to hurry and update! I mean you stinkin left me with a cliffy!! Thankies!!
Queen Ehlana

This is SO cool!! I really, really like this story!! It's awesome! It's funny that Layne's so impatient. I hope Lord V. dies a slow painful death! Bwahaha!! :D Please continue this is a wonderful story!!
Queen Ehlana

I Can't stand this! A Coffin! Come on kid get a sense of imagination.

Ok one, eternity dosent have 2 end thats why its called ETERNITY duh! Its obvouis u dont know a lot about vamps so read Twilight and be on team Edward and then you'll know and if u already read it, GO read it again. srry bye

If it's too hard to translate it and find the mistakes, then get an English-speaking beta to fix it for you. Idiot. Also, vampires suck.

pretty good. keep up the good work!!