Okay, I realize that this is old, but I have such a weakness for friendships between the cheerleader/b*tch (always, pretty much, my fave character) and the angry outcast type. I hope you update this, because I also like that you didn't make them have some long, random, involved history, so it's sort of changing who the audience thinks of as the bad guy.

haha, hm insight into kelly's mind perhaps?

me and rhi don't have THAT much animosity between us though! D: lol cept when I use words like animosity and she freaks cause they're too long.

I actually read this story a long time ago and I can't believe I never reviewed it haha

Are you EVER going to finish it btw? or at least make it a twoshot with like the second part fast forwarding to the presentation showing how well they work together. Then you could at least call it done lol

I LIKE, I LIKE, I LIKE!

...I like!

[“Because. You’re a guy. And she’s a pretty girl. You’re only saying this stuff because of her looks,”] Period, not comma. LOL.

BUT AWW, ZACH! He seems so sweet. D: Riley is definitely interesting, though. I can't wait to see her grow up as a character. But I enjoy the extremely sharp and judgmental attitude for now. xDD

[“Yeah. Maybe we’ll get lucky and be paired together. I just hope I don’t get stuck with anyone really stupid.” Zack replied.] Comma, not period.

[“Hey.” Riley said, not looking at her partner.] Comma after "Hey." Rude much?! LOL, that girl.

["...Those two hate each other a lot.” Mr. Jenkins said.] Comma, not period. And I pity Kayla, really I do. To have to be in the middle of that mess...SHEESH.

[“I don’t think so, Hanson.” He said. ] Comma, lowercase "He."

[For all I care you can leave after that.” Brooke yelled.] Comma, or maybe even exclamation point, but not a period. xD

[“Um, hi.” The girl who must’ve been Riley said.] Comma, lowercase "The."

[“Uh, yeah. Nice to meet you,”] Period, not comma.

[&ASLDFKAJ&] LOL! I REALLY LIKE YOUR SCENE BREAKS BTW.

Anyway, so. I think I've already told you how much I like the idea of this story. It seems really character-centered, like you're not allowing yourself a way out of spending time developing them. And I just really like that you're expressing that friendships can be formed between the unlikeliest of people. It warms my cheesy heart. LOL. Their names fit them, I think. Nice choices.

[But she was kind of glad that it was a group project; it’d be easier to make friends that way. If her group was nice, that is.] THIS MIGHT TAKE A WHILE, THOUGH.

Can't wait to see where you take this! UPDATE SOON, FRIEND!

;)becky

I really liked this. And the story isn't short at all. It's longer them mine anyways. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Good beginning. I feel sorry for Kayla. Nice work. Keep writing!

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~