Teen angst at it's finest! So beautiful and so sad.

Well, isn't this just depressing. :(

(this is for the last chapter (death and love),but I already reviewed it so it wont let me...but why aren't you updating! ahh! You're killing me here,haha.
update soon,please!

I was in love in with Aiden Bailey.
YAY! LOVE IT! update soon please(:

“I was going to say, ‘Do you see me the way I see you?’”
That has got to be the most perfect line ever. I think I want my future love to confess to me just like that.

Alright, that ends my daydreaming and fantasies. -sigh- Moving on...

"This was my heart slamming against my chest, this was a kiss ..."
You might want to separate those two independent clauses.
"This was my heart slamming against my chest. This was a kiss..."
And as long as what follows "This was a kiss..." is indeed describing the kiss, separating via a period/semicolon will make more sense. You talk about the situation in general in the first clause (i.e. like having her heart slamming against her chest) and the kiss in the second clause.


"this was a kiss was all"
should actually be
"this was a kiss that was all"

"And maybe I let it go further than a kiss because I have to have his skin against mine, has to press the warmth of him against me."
should be
"And maybe I let it go further than a kiss because I had to have his skin against mine, had to press the warmth of him against me."
It's a tense issue.

I'm being picky about that paragraph because it's a crucial scene (and plus, my eyes always focus in on scenes that make my heart go pitter-patter.) Your writing is beautiful, so don't let simple mistakes detract from the feelings that readers can garner from your words.

Mr. Bailey's ugly side is coming out! Whoo. I'd definitely like to see more of this and get an understanding of why exactly Aiden hates his stepfather so much.

Great chapter! Thank you for the update.

-S

What?! Man, that was not fair! What was he going to ask? Did it have anything to do with all the little moments they had been having? And who screamed? Ahh...this cliff-hanger will drive me crazy. Thanks a lot, ;) But I am at least happy that Celeste is FINALLY over Alex. Does that mean the flashbacks at the beginning of each chapter will stop now?
And EW for perverted, old best friends. Though the apparent jealousy that Aiden was feeling because of Wes was awesome. Haha.

My god, this is still one of my favorite romance fics. The emotion is just so bloody tangible, and I never get bored with the writing. You deserve an SKOW award, and then some.

OH MY GOSH! I absolutely love this! Please,please,please keep writing! It's so good! I mean there's a few typos,but the story is truly great. Im hooked :p
Update soon please(:

this ones my favorite

What a beautiful ending for this chapter!

Fantastic chapter. Thank you!

Aww...that was a perfect and really great chapter. Though, I don't think I would've been able to forgive Alex if I was Celeste...a year is a horribly long time to ignore someone, especically if you took that someone's first kiss.

you are an amazing writer

I loce this

Aiden really is sweet...I think I love him, it;s not even funny. It was nice of him to help Celeste and her friends. Anyway, update soon, and keep up the AWESOME work! :)