I loved this. The truth in it is beautiful and yet painful. I liked the part where the narrator calls some people hypocrites and tells them they haven't opened their eyes. Wonderful!

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I liked the fourth stanza because it was more personal. The second line of the sixth stanza really helped tie in that personal tone with the other, more diatribe-like tone.

Some people, unfortunately, believe that ignorance is bliss. It's disgusting, isn't it? This piece had a very good message. Great job! :)

Wow! An inconvenient truth. I really like this one. It points out an issue many people do not want to associate themselves with. Almost a taboo. If I don’t recognize its existence it does not exist. Well done. I enjoyed reading it.

''Life's beautiful if you keep the bad things away from your heart'' That is absolutely true. Some people can't see the beauty in life, because their eyes haven't fully been opened. I really thought you did an excellent job on this. Keep it Up!