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whildchild 2009-09-05 . chapter 2
Love love love this story!! Will you be continueing it??
Smiles
Whild
freakylass 2009-07-07 . chapter 2
Please, please, please update soon... I can't wait to read what happens next. I love all the characters and the bonds in this story.
envious-minds 2009-01-20 . chapter 2
When will you be updating? I'm keen to know what happens next! :)
The Cowardly Lion 2008-07-12 . chapter 2
wow! I totally loved the first story about Andy and this one already looks interesting.

I really like this so you should update it!

Blankppr 2008-07-11 . chapter 2
Relatively fast is not fast enough for me ;_;
Alenor 2008-07-06 . chapter 2
oh i want more! this is good, can't wait for another update. cya next time ~ Alenor
california kills 2008-07-04 . chapter 2
I'm so happy you're writing sequel! I can't believe Jonas got back together with Chamellia...the idiot. Can't wait for the next chapter!
FutureWriter 2008-07-04 . chapter 2
Oh, there are obviously still feelings there. Most definitely. And I'm kind of glad Rylee's mother interrupted Rylee almost telling Jonas she still loves him because it's way too soon for him to hear that. He was obviously hurt when she left and didn't keep in touch, so I think there are some bitter feelings that need to be dealt with before they try to rekindle what they had.

I just hope Jonas gets rid of Chamellia now that he knows Rylee's staying. Chamellia doesn't sound like she's changed at all. Jonas is smarter than that. I hope she was simply a rebound because he was missing Rylee or a way to try to forget about Rylee. Either way, I doubt he really has feelings for her.

Thanks for the quick update! This is great so far, so keep writing!
lil' kayla 2008-07-04 . chapter 2
great chapter. I can't wait for you to update again.
Strangely Natural 2008-07-04 . chapter 2
Frustrating and sweet, all in all a good chapter that makes you want a third. So please update as skillfully as you do soon!
lil' kayla 2008-07-03 . chapter 1
I'm so happy to see you got a sequel to Fallen Angel up. I have reread Fallen Angel many times and hoped for a sequel so thank you. and please update soon.
Strangely Natural 2008-07-03 . chapter 1
Great first chapter, so good to read about the gang again and how's they've changed but remained constant all the same. Just can't believe he went back to her, how could Jonas do that! Didn't he learn anything from his past experiences and his mother?! Well no matter in time and with new chapters ;) I hope he'll see the light and Reily in it so he doesn't go blind :P
Update soon please!
hpfreakout 2008-07-02 . chapter 1
Yay, sequel!

I liked the first chapter. It was a nice introduction. The review of the previous story was a bit quick and to the point, but it worked. I also liked the careers given to the characters.

I can't wait for more!
FutureWriter 2008-07-02 . chapter 1
I have to say that your writing is still wonderful. I was excited to get an alert for this, and thanks for your PM, too. I know some people don't like sequels, but I do because you get to see the characters older and more mature; you get to see how they've changed, and the people they've become. Yet, as a writer, you have to keep their original personalities intact somewhat, which is what you've done here beautifully. I have to admit, I've forgotten a little about the secondary characters, but it will come back to me the more I read, I'm sure.

I already love the plot, too. It makes sense that the long-distance relationship didn't work out. Jonas being with Chamellia is a shock, though. This is going to be really interesting. I do hope, of course, that Jonas and Rylee end up together, but it can't happen too soon. It will be fun watching them get to know each other all over again, this time as mature adults. They went through a lot when they were teenagers, so I'm anxious to see what you have planned!

Oh, one missing word: ...I hadn’t thought he would BE in a relationship with Chamellia of all people.

Great start! Update soon!
Blankppr 2008-07-02 . chapter 1
Oh I'm so excited for the next one. I feel so bad for Rylee, I woulod be so upset if I was her. I want top read the next chapter so bad.
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