this was so sweet!

i felt a feeling you were describing ... as if i felt like a zombie with nothing to live for slouching over getting eaten by thin air and being forgotten

great job! :)

Ah... loved it. It flowed and it meant something, and this line: "Wielding all these moments". Love that line...

I've been there. Sometimes running away seems like the best way to solve problems, when it actuality it doesn't fix anything. Great piece. Keep it Up!

Wow. Beautifuly written! I enjoyed reading it. Great discription! The words blend and work together well. Good job =)