This is very beautiful. I'm struggling at the moment to write so any advice you could give me would be greatly appreaciated. I love the imagery in this, the feeling of loneliness. It feels quiet, peaceful and yet at the same time as if the speaker wants to break free of this. I dont know if this is what you were trying to achieve but this is how i interpretated it. Wonderful.

an interesting and refreshing piece. the last stanza was quite beautiful.

it seems that you forgot a space (or a hyphen) between the word "crazy" and "beautiful" in the first line of the second to last stanza.