Interesting topic for one thing, and great imageries. I especially liked the way you used one- and two-syllable words only so that the poem had a certain, hateful beat to it.

Well done!

fleur

I don't think that this follows the haiku rules, but it was good.

wow.

detail & emotion in such a small package.

good!

This is good, powerful lines. And I dont know what the first review is talking about, it does go 5,7,5! xD

This was excellent, first line being my favorite. Keep it Up!

Um Haiku g no But its not bad