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| marii 2008-08-21 ch 1,  | abuseNow I wanted to be kissed by John! |
| Jenc11 2008-08-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, John is really aggressive. I'm not surprised Vanessa thought he hated her. |
| - RomanticallyCliche - 2008-08-14 ch 1, | abusenice |
| sheeparelove22 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abusei cant think of what to say..except wow :O |
| 7years 2008-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseFinally a story where the girl isn't in love with her best friend or the guy she grew up with. This one was a pretty predictable and abrupt. It's a sweet story and the kind of story I want to smack both characters for being so dense. I guess a kiss will prove a lot more than words. Thank you. |
| Laura Schiller 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseWhoa...my screen's smoking from the heat of their passion! Great story! Especially the little details of description that characterize Vanessa - hot chocolate etc. - and the way she worries about John is very realistic and also very sweet. |
| Linece 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! ♥ You're an awesome writer. Thanks for the good time I had reading it! ;) |
| ghepardo 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story! |
| alemica 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseI read this a few days ago, but forgot to review! I really really liked this story! especially that John was jealous of Vanessa and Simon, it was cute lol! i hope we get to see more of these two in the future along with your other oneshot couples. Im off to read and review the other 2 stories you've just posted! dont stop writing Kate, you're just too damn good at it... |
| Spring Angel 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseW.O.W. my head is spinning from all the excitement. |
| katie valentine 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abusei would love to read more, :D |
| cookies 2008-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abusePLEASE MAKE ANOTHER PART TO THIS STORY! PLEASE! I LOVE IT! =) |
| Lily Llynn 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI don't think the title really fits, but this was a well-written, entertaining, cliche, fluffy, but awesome oneshot. I really liked it, and I'm adding it to my c2. (: |
| chocolategoodness 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abusenice! |
| sammy 2008-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so cute! =) another awesome 1shot! |