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shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 7/6/08 . chapter 1I really like this especially how you wrap it up so ncely at the end. |
Faith Adeline 7/2/08 . chapter 1I like this, good job :) Faith |
simpleplan13 7/2/08 . chapter 1"and the building is just as incomplete/as the plans for it." I didn't like incomplete because you just used complete. Also I don't think you need the second line, it just seemed odd to me. I think you could put the first one with the line after those two, though. Just a thought. "(forever and two days is more time/that what they have to complete this place)" I think you mean than not that I like this a lot. The metaphor is really interesting, well extended and fit perfectly. It's a really creative piece. |
Random-Idiocity 7/2/08 . chapter 1Awesome job on this, makes me think of all the things that are incomplete. Keep it Up! |
Kate Marshall 7/2/08 . chapter 1I love it. I love all your stuff. (Well, I haven't read *all* your stuff- there's like almost 300) |