|Reviews for work in progress|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 7/6/08 . chapter 1
I really like this especially how you wrap it up so ncely at the end.
| Faith Adeline 7/2/08 . chapter 1
I like this, good job :)
| simpleplan13 7/2/08 . chapter 1
"and the building is just as incomplete/as the plans for it." I didn't like incomplete because you just used complete. Also I don't think you need the second line, it just seemed odd to me. I think you could put the first one with the line after those two, though. Just a thought.
"(forever and two days is more time/that what they have to complete this place)" I think you mean than not that
I like this a lot. The metaphor is really interesting, well extended and fit perfectly. It's a really creative piece.
| Random-Idiocity 7/2/08 . chapter 1
Awesome job on this, makes me think of all the things that are incomplete. Keep it Up!
| Kate Marshall 7/2/08 . chapter 1
I love it. I love all your stuff. (Well, I haven't read *all* your stuff- there's like almost 300)