I like this piece as well. The semi-suspense was nice of praying and praying as it seems to become more evident. Nice job.

You seem to write religious poetry, well this one i liked because i could see it as a song. Oh wait, i just realized something, if i'm going to read and review each of your poems, you're gonna have like 303 messages in you're email. So i'll stop here and wait for a reply from you. (Though i'll probably still secretly read)

interesting writing style. very thought provoking in it's way.