Reviews for a deep connection

JC-Saved-Me 2008-07-10 ch 1,	abuseWow, that is what a call a poem of deep intercession! xRachx
shadows of a trackless sea 2008-07-06 ch 1,	abuseI like this but how you end it in daddy I think for the tone of this piece father would be better suited but aside from that it is amazing my dear =)
helixdown 2008-07-03 ch 1,	abuseWow, i love the acrostic thing you did there!
simpleplan13 2008-07-02 ch 1,	abuse"our connection is a/d-e-e-p-e-r/ than".. either a deeper one or just is deeper than "e very piece and"... I don't think you need the and and you just had the and in the line before, so I might get rid of it. I like the piece, the formatting is interesting and I like how you go through different pieces. I also like the ending it was unexpected. Nicely done.
Iccle Fairy 2008-07-02 ch 1,	abusevery well written!!
Dreaming Chica 2008-07-02 ch 1,	abuseA poem filled with powerful emotions, well done! I like how you made this poem very discriptive, I think it added alot to it! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
Random-Idiocity 2008-07-02 ch 1,	abuseAn absolutely beautiful piece, I thought you did a great job with the ending. Keep it Up!