very deep and powerful... emotionally charged in a way that only those of us who have been in that kind of situation can know.

This is so good, lovey. In a heartbreaking sort of way.

Wow! Such a deep and powerful poem. I love how you repeated the line "If I thought it would make you well" throughout the poem. The poem its self holds so much emotion, it was very well written!

Dreaming Chica

This was lovely, I like how you involved the title to be part of the beginning of the piece. Great job. Keep it Up!