omg! talk about cliff hangers girl! what the hell happens nwxt!! this is by far my fave out of the others that i have read from you! omg i need to know what the hell happends and also i give it 100 out of 100!

so far after what i have read of chapter one and now chapter two. i can side with girl. when i was growing up my mother was kind of like that she favored my brothers over me and the only nice one was my father. so i can feel where she is coming from. :D this is great so far. by the way the stories that you always come up with are great!

Very cute and humorous chapter. I was either laughing or inwardly saying 'aw' to myself throughout this one. Considering the recent events, it's nice to see everyone happy here.

This was a really cute chapter. I like the interactions with Yuji and Maya. They seem like such good friends.

This was another great chapter. Things are definitely getting thicker with Sayonara, the meeting and the Shine guy thrown into the mixture. I wonder what will happen to Maya if she keeps hanging around him and why Daisetsu has a strange feeling about him. I also wonder what that meeting was about at the end of the chapter. So many questions, so little time!

Such an emotional scene for Daisetsu and Maya. I really liked this chapter and I can tell that their feelings are growing for each other and they are undoubtedly becoming closer.

Definitely a turning point in the story here. It seems that Maya has shown something of an angelic side. I wonder how things will progress between she and Daisetsu now that he's seen her wings?

I nearly thought that Daisetsu was going to go far with those girls but I'm glad that he didn't. I do feel sorry for Maya though, she completely got the wrong idea. I'm interested in what will happen next chapter.

This was a pretty good chapter. I liked the action scenes in this one a little more then I did the confrontation between Daisetsu and Maya's brother. The only thing that bothered me was the lack of description on the Tornado Attack. I think that the attack should have been described because as a reader, I don't know what it consists of.

I like the portrayal of emotions and the beginning of Maya and Daisetsu's relationship as well. I certainly hope that Daisetsu comes back to her and that his gang can take care of Maya while she's down.

This was a good chapter. I can tell that both of your writing has progressed since I first began to read this story. I only had one problem with this chapter and that was that Maya's mother agreed a little too quickly to letting her live with Daisetsu for a while. I think she should have questioned him more about the project and her daughter but other then that I really liked the way that this chapter ended. It was emotional and very cute. Great job guys!

This was a very emotional chapter for both characters. I can't say that Maya's brother didn't get what was coming to him, however. I think a little more description of the fight would have been better to add more suspense, but other then that you had a great chapter. Great job!

so cute!

Valentine's day is on the 14th of February not the 18th.

Hey there Silencia.
I've only ever cried once from a book, but this story so far left tears in my eyes. I'm having to blink them away, right now. The story is wonderful, and i hope when it's finished that you get it published. You're quite good at writing all these stories, and i absoulutly adore your work.
Love
KAYLA BROWN

Looks like Maya and Daisetsu are getting closer but it seems that her friends are definitely not too fond of him, either that or they are jealous. Definitely look forward to your next chapter.