Ok this chapter is too comfusing!
so I give up on your story

nexted time tell someone when your changing POV instead of just doing it!! and tell who your changing it to, I don't want to use my brain when I read a story!

cute...^-^"

AW!! THAT WAS SO CUTE!! YAY!! THEY COULD BE TOGETHER! Man... the new empress sure has a lot on her hands with her family as well as the whole kingdom. But with her family... THAT'S LIKE WORSE THAN THE KINGDOM!

I didn't get some of what was happening because I forgot who people were. ^^; But I came back and all the sudden it was death/murder/suicide/other stuff! I was like... WHOA!

OMG I absolutely loved your story! The scandal, the underlining plan, all of it was awesome! Keep up the great work!

oh, that was sweet ^^. i didn't think it was too fluffy - you built up the suspense nicely, and congrats on the first completed story :D. anyways, everything seemed tied together fairly nicely and i hope to read more from you soon. a great read! @ plus!

alright, there were a lot of pleasing twists, turns, and consequences in this chapter, so i thought it was terrific! at first, i was a bit shocked to learn that it's ending...but shorter series are better to finish and it is nice to have a bunch of finished stories rather than fleeting plotlines (...like me T.T). i'm off to finish up the next chapter!

OMG that was so cute.

It was a cute ending. It seems that peace will come to the country again. Hopefully you're write another awesome story such as this one. Thanks for these stories, they were great!

~Deathscythe Outlaw

Keep writing!

Sorry I haven't updated in a while, I was gone from the computer for the whole week (will be next week to, it stinks!), but to me it seems like your suddenly rushing the story, everything is happening extremely fast. I recommend having one or two things happening in each story and carrying that in great detail, that is what's lacking the most to me. Update soon!

WOW! A lot twists in this chapter too. Man, I truly can't wait to see what you have in store for the ending of this story. I have no doubt that it's going to be great.

~Deathscythe Outlaw

Keep writing!

oh, i just loved how the intensity rose in that chapter! it really got me pumped up ^^!

as for your author's note, you can't entirely trust yourself. give it a few days - you could be tired from working so hard on the story. actually, i thought the pace was a little better than the others this time.

ben, c chouette et continue, s.v.p!

No this chappie was very nice. I like how Madoka stood up to her father. She rawked. ^_^. Great job! ^_^

Aw it's okay, sometimes when I write I'm like that to some of the chapters, haha. But I loved this chapter lol. xD Madoka was so col. The way she just did that to her father. @_@ ANYHOO I'm glad Ayako got owned. xD

Thumbs up!

I don't know what you are talking about because I thought that this was as great as the others. Madoka was really something in this chapter. However, for some reason, I feel as if there's more to Madoka, or rather she has something up her sleeve. Still, I'm loving this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

~Deathscythe Outlaw

Keep writing!

PS
Oh, I know I'm late with this, but I'll like to say thank you for the dedication.

That was an excellent chapter! Woohee! I love it! And a collection of one shots sounds good too. I won't mind that at all.

As for the Rikago/Madoka moment: Anything with kissing is good. XD

Keep up the great work and thanks for putting my name up in bold. I FWEEL SWO SPWECIAL NOW! *hugs Kai-Ka!* ^_^