FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Syn871 2008-07-27 ch 3,  | abuseHahaha. Made me laugh at the randomness. :] So they're running from that awful Jay and then they're suddenly wearing 1800's clothing. I still loved it. You know, I'm really liking Alternate Realities (Chris sounds really cool) because teens can actually relate to it if even a bit. And I did notice the difference in writing style. I personally liked this one better but I think you should stick with whatever you're comfortable with. :] |
| Syn871 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseLovely! I enjoy your new ideas for stories. I'm already loving your character Lucy. She's got hilarity-issues. I noticed that you put Rae instead of Lucy when they part ways. Or is that just me? :] |