I wished this would happened to me (ha!). It would save me a lot of trouble with blind dates and well-meaning friends.

Anyway, I really liked this piece. I like your style of writing - it's almost poetic, perfect for something romantic like this. I could never write a one-shot romance without making it painfully cheesy. I tip my hat to you.

As a side note, I wanted to read your other story, Crave, but I don't have the time tonight to read it. So you'll probably see another review from me eventually (:

that was a cute story. :)
in the first line though (as in the first row) you forgot the 'g' in 'my eyes stung' ..
yeah..just thought i would tell you.
anyways.. great story
can't wait for and update of Apple :)

I really liked this. The narrative was comfortable and it moved along at a good place. Your characters were easy to relate to as well.

Thanks for the great read!

- Koki