Loved this, the theme with the cheese and crackers was cute too. Great job!

I liked this title...I like titles like this, that are part of the story!

But does Trinity likes sam or did she just settle with him?

that was so adorably cheesy! (i loved it!) Sam, ah, Sam! love him!

and Trinity's such a pretty name, too.

-toffeecakesxox.

Very cute ending. I'm glad the jerk didn't get her.

Loves. PInkamoo!

aw )

Heheh. Cheese and Crackers. First off, I love the title. It's what made me read this story. And I really like the name Trinity. Next, I LOVE this one. 0.0 So.. er.. happy and nice. :] Super totally awesome.

Aw.

That was really, really sweet. :]] I loved the end with the cheese. x] That was too cute.

Adorable!

Sorry..I'm trying to come up with new words to express my enthusiasm.

:P

Ali

This was really fluffy!

:D

As I'm now in love with your cute like stories, I'm going to have to put you on my favorite author list.

I'm officially a stalker.

how sad.

I'm just kidding or am I?

Dun dun don.

Sorry that is the sugar talking. xD

-Thea

Yeah, this was pretty good. I didn;t get the chance to read Trinity though. Must have been a pretty good stoy. :D Anyway, I lived this story a lot. It's vey cute and cheesy (no pun intended) and cliche (though with a hint of originality) and nice. So I really liked it. Continue writing such wonderful one-shots. Peace.

Aw that was so cute, I loved it.

JM

I think I read the original, and though I like this title better, I still agree with what I said before. I feel like the romance is forced because it was introduced so late in the story, but I do think the extension here makes it a better. But I still think the romance was just jutted in there. :P

I love your summary! Very adorable!

Hah, I totally loved it ]

It was really funny and cheesy(as you said, no pun intended XD), but completely awesome.

It would have been pretty cool if you had made it longer though.

Anyhoo, please pass by my page and check my story.

Its new ]