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| JEFFREY LOURIE 2008-07-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am not surprised that an aspiring doctor and already accomplished poet would think up such a wonderful poetic conceit. As much as I would like to wield the scalpel of my sharp critical eye [How is THAT for a mixed metaphor?], I can detect no defect. It would have been nice to make a few cutting remarks. |
| Isca 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuse"Anesthetize the anxiety." Amazing line! :) |
| J.O.Cooper 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseWhat a very clever way to express writer's block. Excellent! I like it a lot! |