wow. what a beginning. i can't imagine exactly the background to it but it was very vivid and i intend to find out the story that goes with it! great work

whoa this is really interesting I cant wait for the next chapter :D

Yay! we finally understand why she had to have secrets! I love this chapter! Its my favorite so far!
plz *puppy dog eyes* update soon!
-Moon

I like the sudden twist. I can't believe she was told not to even trust her friend and care taker for all these years. You know something bad is coming when that is said. Thank for updating.

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... you have to install soon...

You have a very good writing style which is very effective for this type of book. Keep up the Good work!

LOL This was too funny I love this little encounter
Great chapter love it :D

OMG I want to cry that is sad but very interesting it leaves me in suspence of what is to come
I cant wait :)

dah! finally! I still love it!
Its wicked awesomeness!
I do wish you would update more though *sigh* I can't make you, but it would be greatly appreciated!

This story is really good so far!
I can't wait to read the rest!

I really like it. I hope you continue this one and update shortly.

very interesting, keep up the good work! =]

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I like it! I still have to read the second chapter, but so far I like it!

Ah... I wanna know more!

I find this one interesting, really! The beginning is somehow made me wanna check this one out! :)

I hoped you have time to write this... cause I wanted you to continue this, really!! Can't wait for your update!! XD