Hi. I can't really see your weba adress. All I got was .com. I'm still reading this story and hoping for more.

OMG don't stop! I really want to know what happens next! wah...it was just getting good too!

I started All About Us earlier toady, and i couln't stop myself from finishing. It. Is. AMAZING! I love this story and I can't wait till you update. I Love U!... but i really love this more!:) Please update soon and never leave me! (I'm a drama queen)I am in love! Thanks for writing this story and for just being here, bye and again thanks a bunch of odles!

I really love this story and its sort of funny that last week I was re reading it. And I was wondering if you're gonna update this story. I'll check out your site and I hope you do update this story.

uhh hey
=]

the url for your new site got eaten by fiction press. [FP disables them]
but i would really like to read your stories. Could you send me the link in an email?

magical narrator @ aim . com

[just take out the spaces]

Haha I got all excited thinking this updated, tbh. :P And you need to put spaces in the site name, because it didn't work. ;) And I want it. :D

Ttyl. :)

~Maggie, AftG

Angel was so horrible to Payton in the beginning.

Somehow I think that Payton only read the early Anita Blake books, before she had so many lovers. I think her orgies would have freaked him out.

Some of it feels kind of rushed. In one instance Payton went from furious to asleep in about a hundred words.

The whole Angel milking a three hundred pound ball of muscle with foot long tusks which could rip a man open with the nod of her head gives the story a fantasy feel.

If you ever finish it, I want to read the rest.

** put up the next chapter i want to see what happens next

I actually read this story a week and a half ago, but I was too busy to review/alert and everything. But now, I finally am able to :)

At first when I came across this story, I was wary since I figured it'd be like another Lost, and so it took me a few times of coming across it (on others favorites) till I decided to give it a try. I was shocked. Seriously. This story is so interesting! Nothing like Lost (which I used to watch but grew tired of). Payton and Angel's transformation from being siblings that fight pretty roughly (and take things too far), to caring for the other, and worrying about their safety was what really reeled me in. My favorite part of this whole story so far is when he held Payton when they were on the boat during the storm and then when the boat sank, and Angel got to Payton (saving his life). That, and more shows that Angel cares for his brother :) I loved it. Which brings me to how they are now. Angel seems to have grown up more, he's more mature and is like the 'husband' on the island, while Payton is like the 'wife'. lol. It's cute. Also, Angel went from being someone that could easily punch Payton, to someone who saves Payton and worries for him.

The grandpa part is sad though. Is he dead? Did he wash up on another island? Or maybe the same one, just in a different area? I really, really don't want the grandpa to die.

I also wonder if Angel is seeing Payton as more than a brother. A few things have happened that to me, seems like hints that Angel's mind isn't so pure around his brother. I think. If that's the case then I'm wondering if he'll act on it soon... or if Payton will suddenly start to feel something for Angel? I can't wait.

Anyway, great story so far. I'm glad I found it, and please update soon! I really want to read more :)

-eVil uNicorns-

P.s. I love your long chapters!!

Hey i really like how this story is coming out, keep it up, i presume your still writing this. Cant wait to read more ^^

Do you need a beta? 'Cause I would be happy to help. You have some minor grammatical mistakes and stuff.

i love this story! you have really good character development! update soon! ;3

Wow. This story is really interesting! I just can't stop reading, and now that I have to, I'll probably be thinking about it and imagining what'll happen until the next chapter comes out. :D Great idea for a story! you make it surprisingly realistic, with slow progression of their feelings for eachother. Although, I can tell that Angel has at least thought about Payton that way. But it's hard to make a romance between brothers seem realistic, and you're doing a great job. Showing how their eventual feelings will come as a result of needing and caring for eachother and of their current situation, which brings them closer together in one way, and another, and then another, until finally romantically. Anyway, I hope you'll get some amazing inspiration and put up another chapter soon!! I can't wait to read more! :D

Hi. I just wanted to let you know I love this story, but FP was being stupid and I've had to wait 3 days just to say that. Anyways, please keep updating!

I love this. Its so different then the other ones I've read. For one, they didn't get along AT ALL. I really do love this a lot and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!