a simple 'hey, loved it, keep writing'... Joking aside your story is well written and enjoyable to read.

so sweet

of course I loved it, what else could I possible do?

lolol, best a/n ever

omg holy crap, what kind of dog is that?

yayayay flyiing monkeys! Elphie! They are so awesome, especially chisery. And his costume OMG.

You're so pale and strong? That's not even gushy, it's just weird

THIS IS GENUIS NEVER EVER GIVE UP WRITING!

I love the basic plot idea, but you disjointed writing is hard to take. Nothing ever gets explained or solved. We just go from one cut off chater to another.

Wow, if I read this correctly, this is the original? And you started writing it at thirtheen? It's really good already so it makes me wonder how much better it can get... I'll look for the second version now to get an answer to that ;-)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! that's not scratchig the surface of how much I LOVE this story! I... Just... Uh... ASDFGHJK!
I LOVE YOU!

sooo cute
loved it :D

Finally! A story that is awesome as well as amazing! I dislike it so much when a fun, innocent plot turns very perverted. You stuck true to the plot and oyur writing style, and for that I thank you! (*Pats you on the back*) I stayed up all night finishing this one. You had me hooked from chapter one! :) Great job! (*thumbs up!*)

I love your A/Ns. And your story of course :D

i gotta admit i like the way you got tayu to the guy. Love!

now gotta keep reading...