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| xGekkeiju 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseHello Mun Seong! (: This is a gorgeous poem. It flows very well, and you've even managed to include a nice little rhyme scheme - but what's so great about it is that your rhymes are original (unlike "you" and "too", for example). The concept is absolutely stunning, and you've explained "rage" perfectly through your description. Well done! Keep writing, keep working at it, keep improving. ~Wren |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely amazing. For such few words you describe rage beautifully, and the flow was nice too. Looks like you might could start a series with this, I think that would be neat. Anyways great work. Keep it Up! |
| x-AmeliaRose-x 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseIt's perfect! i could tell it was rage even if you didn't say it. it's flows well too. looking forward to more |